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jelly girl

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late birthday present to my friend :iconriyoshii:

tool: SAI
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1600x1526px 1.12 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Okay so this is my first critique so don't get mad. I like the smart use of colors and lighting in the picture, to be honest I can't think of a better color for the jelly(maybe the hair could be a different color though-_-). It would be nice if there was a background but that is the only flaw I noticed. I like the little tan marks you added so she isn't too pale. Can I ask though, why is it that the jelly on her wrist different from all the rest of the jelly(which is orange). This pic does deserve all the fav's it gets. This my first critique so please don't hate too much -_-